Flowers of light

Hi, this is a song I wrote years ago... could you please tell me what is correct, and what is would be incorrect if those wouldn't have been the verses were not from a song? Thank you.


Flowers of light

Amy, your eyes are flowers of light
Amy, the rose in your hair sings a song
Amy, your eyes are flowers of light
Sunshine, the sky has the shape of your smile

I am totally crazy for you
I am helplessly crazy for you

Sunrise, the top of the world in your hand
Amy, your eyes are flowers of light

I am totally crazy for you
I am helplessly crazy for you

And your heart shines

Corrado, there are no issues regarding grammar.

--Ravi.