The Trip - Day 1

August 6th

At 5 o'clock in the morning my mobile phone alarm rang and I woke up a little startled. I was still feeling sleepy, though. After a few minutes of trying to get up, I was awake and getting ready for the trip. While I was making a chocolated milk for breakfast, my brother was still sleeping and my mother was checking on our baggage. I felt lazy and a little bit excited. I really liked the idea of missing some classes to go on a trip with my family. At 6 in the morning, we were off to Porto de Galinhas; my mother, my brother and I. It wasn't long before we were finally there, however, we had to wait a little longer. When everything was ok, we got into our rooms to wait for my aunt and my cousins (we're in seperate rooms, of course). They got to the hotel later and now they are in their room*. Right now, it isn't happening what I expected. This place lacks people and I'm kind of bored. The bed is comfortable, though.

My mother is making us something to eat in my aunt's room. My brother doesn't stop talking—I don't know how he does that. He never gets tired.

There's one thing I like about hotels: eating snacks. Food is too expensive here, so my mother brings food from home. I've just eaten canned fish noodles.

It's 7:39 PM now and I'm watching TV with my brother. It's been comfortable in here at least. Perhaps I'll read some Harry Potter after a shower.

I haven't been to the pool yet. I'm looking forward to enjoying the pool tomorrow. See you guys.

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*This should be "rooms" if your aunt and cousins have separate rooms too. Or "room" if your aunt and cousin are sharing a room (which I already understand is separate from yours).

Great passage! Only a few tiny corrections to make here and there :)