Early technological developments helped ordinary people... Early technological developments helped ordinary people and changed their lives more than recent technological developments. Do you agree or

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Early technological developments helped ordinary people... Early technological developments helped ordinary people and changed their lives more than recent technological developments. Do you agree or disagree? -------------------------------- All kinds of technologies develop rapidly, which changes people’s lives every day, whatever is old technologies or present technologies. So I disagree with that early technological revolutions changed people lives more than recent technological developments, they are equally important. Early technological revolutions were related with industrial revolutions, changed ordinary people’s lives. For example, society was beneficial with inventing train and plane, people could travel to other place using short time, commodity also could transport to the different country that you couldn’t image that before. Moreover, through the print press was invented, books and news could spread promptly. It was obviously that help ordinary people save and learn new knowledge and information. Finally, telephone was a crucial invention, which shortened the distance of people’s lives. Therefore, early technological inventions are very important to us. Likewise, new technological developments are also significant. Firstly, smart phone is not just a telephone, which is including tons of Apps and provides many functions. We have seen and continue to see everyone holding a smart phone, even children and teenagers. You could do everything through smart phone, which is entertainment, education or communication. Secondly, the Internet would be the most wonderful innovation, because different website provide different services, you could buy loads of food, read e-books, do business with foreign company, only need a computer and the Internet. It directly influences every people’s lives. Last but not the least, satellite technology expand people’s eyesight, mankind begins to explore external world, at the same time, it also provide lots of useful functions, like GPS navigation could help people to find the exact place. In conclusion, it’s no doubt that old technological revolutions and current technological developments are both important, which help and change people’s lives every day.

2015년 8월 18일 오전 7:25

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Early technological developments helped ordinary people...

Early technological developments helped ordinary people and changed their lives more than recent technological developments. Do you agree or disagree?
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All kinds of technologY develop rapidly, which change people’s lives every day, WHETHER old technologY or present technologY. So I disagree that early technological revolutions changed people'S lives more than recent technological developments; they are equally important.

Early technological revolutions were related TO industrial revolutions AND changed ordinary people’s lives. For example, society was BENEFITED with THE INVENTION OF THE train and plane. People could travel to other placeS IN LESS time AND commodiTIES could BE transportED to different countrIES that WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN POSSIBLE before. ALSO, WHEN the printING press was invented, books and news could BE spread promptly. It was obvious thE help ordinary people GAINED and THE new knowledge and information THEY LEARNED. Finally, THE telephone was a crucial invention, which shortened the distance BETWEEN people’s lives. Therefore, early technological inventions WERE very important to us.

Likewise, new technological developments are also significant. Firstly, THE smart phone is not just a telephone, BUT INCLUDES tons of Apps and provides many functions. We have seen and continue to see everyone holding smart phoneS, even children and teenagers. You CAN do everything through smart phoneS, LIKE entertainment, education AND communication. Secondly, the Internet IS the most wonderful innovation, because different websiteS provide different serviceS. You CAN buy loads of food, read e-books, OR do business with foreign companIES, only needING a computer and the Internet. It directly influences everyONE's lives. Last but not the least, satellite technology expandS people’s eyesight - mankind begins to explore THE external world AND at the same time it also provide lots of useful functions, like GPS navigation THAT CAN help people find exact LOCATIONS.

In conclusion, THERE’s no doubt that old technological revolutions and current technological developments are both important. THEY help and change people’s lives every day.

2015년 8월 18일

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