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today's topic is fireworks I went to see fireworks the day before yesterday. Oomagari fireworks festival is the most famous fireworks festival. About 40,000 people live in Oomagari city, but in the day 800,000 people come to the city to see the foreworks. It was fantastic!!

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today's topic is fireworks

I went to see fireworks the day before yesterday.
Oomagari fireworks festival is the most famous fireworks festival.
About 40,000 people live in Oomagari city, but in the day 800,000 people came to the city to see the fireworks.

It was fantastic!!

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Today's Topic about  Fireworks 

I went to see fireworks the day before yesterday.
Oomagari fireworks festival is the most famous fireworks festival.
About 40,000 people are living in Oomagari city, but in the day 800,000 people came to the city to see the foreworks.

It was fantastic!!

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