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Sleeping One thing that I really like to do is sleep,because I have amazing dreams almost every night that's it's kind of hard to wake up , well sometimes I would like to write down my drams but unfortunately I forgot some parts of them
2015년 8월 28일 오전 3:49
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Sleeping

One thing that I really like to do is sleep. Since I have amazing dreams almost every night, it's kind of hard to wake up. Sometimes I would like to write my dreams down, but unfortunately I forget some of the parts.

 

I tried to correct it without changing it too much.

2015년 8월 28일
1

Sleeping

One thing that I really like to do is sleep,because I have amazing dreams almost every night that's it's kind of hard to wake up , well sometimes I would like to write down my dreams but unfortunately I forget some parts of them.

2015년 8월 28일
I will appreciate if you check my paragraph for grammar and spelling mistakes gracias
2015년 8월 28일
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