Which season is your favorite to you?

Summer is passing by and fall is coming to me. I like summer. I hate winter. I enjoy exercising and traveling, but when it's cold outside is cold, going out is very hard. I don't like to wear thick clothes. When I move to go somewhere at during the cold seasons, I have to pack a heavy luggage. Korea has four distinguishable four seasons. But I think springs and falls 's period are getting shorter*  than before. It probably has been caused by global warming.** Maximum temperature goes up to 35 degree, and minimum temperature goes down to -10 degree in Seoul. At In the summers, the weather is so very humid, so we felt outside it feels too hot. Many foreign people agree with that.*** Which season is the most your favorite to you?**** and why?

My notes:

* "getting shorter" already implies a progression that is changing over time, so "than before" becomes redundant.

**A more natural way to say this is "It's probably caused by global warming", but your sentence is also written correctly, so I didn't change it.

*** "Many foreigners agree." would be a shorter, more common way to say this.

**** "Favorite" already has the meaning of "most liked", therefore "most favorite" is redundant. And "your favorite" is more natural than "favorite to you".

I really liked your entry. Good, thorough topic discussion.