yutaka
The Electric Drums Last night, I stayed up late and went to bed around 2 am. Although I stayed up late, I got up at 6 am this morning because of my insomnia. I wish I could sleep more than 7 hours in a day. In the evening, I played the electric drums for the first time in a while. It was fun! Though I hadn't played it for a long time, I still remembered a drum part of my favorite song.
2015년 8월 30일 오후 12:58
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The Electric Drums

Last night, I stayed up late and went to bed around 2 am. Although I stayed up late, I got up at 6 am this morning because of my insomnia. I wish I could sleep more than 7 hours in a day.

In the evening, I played the electric drums for the first time in a while. It was fun! Though I hadn't played it for a long time, I still remembered the drum part of my favorite song.

 

Hello Yutaka,

 

Just a few small errors but a fine text. Well done. Perhaps you are doing something before you go to bed which is keeping your mind too active. Try relaxing for a while before you go to bed - no computers, phones or televisions!

 

hope this helps

 

Bob

2015년 8월 30일
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