Flora
Vacation I often work overtime, so I applied for one day as vacation. I want to travel to Xiamen((A beautiful city in China) with one of my best friends tomorrow. We can work in seaside beach, and talk about our life at daytime, we can go shopping at night. What a wonderful thing! I’m very exiciting when I think about it.
2015년 9월 1일 오전 7:35
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Vacation

I often work overtime, so I applied for one day as vacation. I want to travel to Xiamen((A beautiful city in China) with one of my best friends tomorrow.
We can work(Walk) in at the seaside of beach, and talk about our life at daytime, we can go shopping at night. What a wonderful thing! I’m very exiciting (excited)when I think about (of) it.

 

 

2015년 9월 1일
We will arrive at there tomorrow, and go back Sep 5.
2015년 9월 1일
You are very welcome to visit this romantic city. But I don't understand the reason this decision is made. Why not come here on sep 3?
2015년 9월 1일
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