Diana
My ring Today, I went to buy in the candy machine when I take out my wallet. I didn't remember on my pocket I had my ring and the ring fell in the floor but under the machine. I knelt to see if I catch up, but I could not. After that, I called man cleaning to help me , he got a broomstick, to move under the machine. Finally, got my ring.
2015년 9월 2일 오전 4:33
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My ring

Today, I went to buy <em>something </em>in the candy machine. When I t<em>ook</em> out my wallet I didn't remember on my pocket I had my ring <em>in my pocket</em> and the ring fell on the floor but <em>and </em>under the machine. I knelt to see if I catch <em>could pick it </em>up, but I could not.

After that, I called man <em>the </em>cleaning <em>man</em> to help me <em>and</em> he got a broomstick to move <em>reach </em>under the machine.

Finally, I got my ring.

2015년 9월 2일

My ring

Today, I went to buy something in the candy machine when I took out my wallet. I didn't remember which pocket I had my ring in and the ring fell on <em>o</em> to the floor but under the machine. I knelt to see if I could reach it, but I could not.

 

también puedes decirlo (Te ofreco esto porque escribiste la palabra 'but'):

the ring not only fell on the floor but under the machine

el sentido es lo mismo pero un enfasis un poco distinto. es como <em>no solo....sino tambien </em>en español

After that, I asked a man who was cleaning to help me , he got a broomstick, and he retrieved the ring from under the machine.

Finally, I got my ring.

2015년 9월 2일
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