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it is written well My name is Jesus, and living in Mexico. Im have 30 years old. I like practice exersice and sport.
2015년 9월 4일 오후 10:09
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It is well written.

My name is Jesus, and I  live in Mexico.
Im am 30 years old and I like exercising and sport.

2015년 9월 4일

It is written well?

My name is Jesus, and I am living in Mexico.
I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

2015년 9월 5일

it is written well (Either "It is well written" or "Is it well written?")

My name is Jesus, and (I am living/I live) in Mexico. ("I am living" sounds more temporary, "I live" suggests a long period of time and perhaps that you are from Mexico.)


I'm have 30 years old. I like practice to exersice and play sports.

2015년 9월 5일
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