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Universe Now I'm very satisfied because I bought my ticket to 'Universo Paralello' at Pratigi Beach, Bahia! This festival won't be only about music or only electronic music. It's about nine days living in a community with differents people during the reveillon party and more six days traveling around the sea of northeast. They are strangers who like the same things, as yoga, nature, beach, surf, sun, camping, art, music and e-music of course with a good vibe and peace. I wanted to go to there since my fifteen years, but this festival is very crazy and just now I think I'm prepared for this... hahah

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Universe

Now I'm very satisfied because I bought my ticket to 'Universo Paralello' at Pratigi Beach, Bahia!

This festival won't be only about music or only electronic music. (not wrong, but you can also write):

This festival won't be only about music or electronic music.

 

It's about nine days living in a community with differents people during the reveillon party and more another six days traveling around the sea of the northeast.

 

They are strangers who like the same things:, as yoga, nature, the beach, surfing, the sun, camping, art, music and e-music of course, with a good vibe and peace. I wanted to go to there since my I was fifteen years, but this festival is very crazy and just now I think I'm prepared for this... hahah

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Universe

Now I'm very satisfied (excited, etc.) because I bought my ticket to 'Universo Paralello' at Pratigi Beach, Bahia! This festival won't be only about music or even electronic music. It's about nine days living in a community with differents people during the reveillon party and more than six days traveling around the northeastern sea. They are strangers who like the same things: as yoga, nature, the beach, surfing, the sun, camping, art, music and of course e-music of course with a good vibe and beat. I wanted to go to there since I was my fifteen years-old, but this festival is very crazy and I think that it's only just now that I think I'm prepared for this... hahah

 

 

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