Today n the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart, is like a drum beat it strongly my chest, that happened around 8:00 in the morning, today I went to the nursing to check my pressure bu

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Today n the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart, is like a drum beat it strongly my chest, that happened around 8:00 in the morning, today I went to the nursing to check my pressure but all was ok. They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I going to call to my doctor for get a consultation.

2015년 9월 26일 오전 2:19

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Today

In the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart. It is like a drum beating strongly in my chest. This happened around 8:00 in the morning. Today I went to the nurse to check my pressure but all was ok.
They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I am going to call to my doctor to get a consultation.

<em>[Good work. Use shorter sentences. I hope everything is all right.]</em>

2015년 9월 26일

Today

In the last days I have felt a queer sensation in my heart. It is like a drum beating strongly in my chest, this happened around 8:00 in the morning. Today I went to the nurse to check my pressure but all was ok.
They say that I must check my cholesterol, so I´m going to call to my doctor to get a consultation.

2015년 10월 4일

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