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christmas
圣诞很是挪威的节日,这是的最重要的节日。在圣诞节, 挪威的人们喜欢吃的好好吃的食物,如烤猪排、鳕鱼和咸阳拍羊排,可是在西方,我们最喜欢咸阳拍羊排。圣诞是公里历12月24日。在圣诞我们使用毒品紫色也和红色的饰品做装饰。
christmas
圣诞很是挪威的节日,(Because Christmas is also the festival of other countries,so better to combine the first two little sentences into one “圣诞节是挪威一年中最重要的节日。”)这是的最重要的节日。在圣诞, 挪威的人们喜欢吃的好(delicious can be expressed with different adjectives,美味、一顿大餐、美食、盛筵……)食物有许多,如烤猪排、鳕鱼和咸阳拍(what‘s that?\(^o^)/~it’s sounds like CHAMPAGNE,or Seasoned Lamb Chop 腌羊排?),可是在西方,我们最喜欢咸阳拍。圣诞是公历里12月24日。在圣诞我们使用毒品(What?!毒品 means drugs……maybe you you mean presents?礼物 or? I guess you mean:在圣诞节我们用紫色红色来装饰我们的礼物,all right?)紫色也红色。
christmas
圣诞很在挪威的是节日(I don't know what exactly you want to say, my correction means Christmas is a festival in Norway),而且这是的最重要的节日。在圣诞节, 挪威的人们喜欢吃的好的食物,如烤猪排、鳕鱼和咸阳拍羊排?,可是在西方,我们最喜欢的是咸阳拍羊排?。圣诞是公里历12月24日。在圣诞节我们使用毒品 (this means drug, i don't know what you mean)紫色也和红色。
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