Marina
Hello Hello, everyone! How are you? Today's Japanese weather is so good:)! Lately, I read this book for my English skill. Do you know this? I know this book is childish.....;(..... But, I enjoy it, and I had a good time. So, don't giggled...lol こんにちは。 元気? 今日の日本はいいお天気だよ。 最近、自分の英語力向上のためにこの本読んでるんだ。 皆知ってる? 子供っぽいってわかってる.....( ;∀;) でも、楽しいし、いい感じだよ。 だから、笑わないで!
2015년 10월 4일 오전 6:15
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Hello

Hello, everyone!
How are you?

Today's Japanese the weather in Japan is so good! :)
Lately, I read this book for my English skill.*

Do you know this it?

I know this book is childish.....;(.....
But, I enjoy it, and I had a good time.**
So, don't giggled laugh... lol

 

*Option 1) Lately, I have been reading this book to practice (my) English.

 Option 2) Recently, I read (past tense) this book to practice (my) English.

 

**Option 1) But I enjoy it.

    Option 2) But I enjoyed it.

    Option 3) But I had a good time reading it.

 

Good! Mostly small mistakes :)


こんにちは。
元気?

今日の日本はいいお天気だよ。
最近、自分の英語力向上のためにこの本読んでるんだ。
皆知ってる?

子供っぽいってわかってる.....( ;∀;)
でも、楽しいし、いい感じだよ。
だから、笑わないで!

2015년 10월 4일
忘れた、がんばってね^^
2015년 10월 4일
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