Patrick Yeok
Entry #5 新しい所に住んでいるのはちょっと大変、かも。。。 数年前、別の家にすんでしました。アメリカから帰って来ましたので、新しい家に住んでいます。感じがちょっと違うかな。。。ここでも慣れていません。市の中心部と友達は遠くです。やっぱり、ここは以前の家よりあまり好きじゃないとおもいます。ちょっと寂しいな... Few years ago, I stayed in a different house. After I came back from America, I stayed in a new house. I feel a little different here. I am not very familiar with this place. The city center and my friends are very far apart from where I stay. After all, I don't really like this place as much as the place I used to stay, I think. It's quite lonely here, isn't it...
2015년 10월 7일 오후 12:13
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Entry #5 新しい所に住んでいるのはちょっと大変、かも。。。

       新しい所に住むのはちょっと大変かも。。。


数年前、別の家にすんでしました。アメリカから帰って来ましたので → アメリカから帰ってきたので

新しい家に住んでいます。感じがちょっと違うかな。。。ここでも慣れていません。→ ここは見慣れていません。

市の中心部と友達は遠くです。 → 市の中心部と友達は私が【僕が)住んでいる所から離れています

やっぱり、ここは以前の家よりあまり好きじゃないとおもいます。ちょっと寂しいな...


Few years ago, I stayed in a different house. After I came back from America, I stayed in a new house. I feel a little different here. I am not very familiar with this place. The city center and my friends are very far apart from where I stay. After all, I don't really like this place as much as the place I used to stay, I think. It's quite lonely here, isn't it...

2015년 10월 7일
ほんの少しだけ直せばだいぶ良くなると思います! Just a little bit of changes will make your writing so much better!
2015년 10월 7일
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