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Hiiii :) I am peruvian , I want to speak english because I love to travel around the world and meet new people , share the same interests , hobbies , ..... . Now , I don't work yet , I am only studying english to learn . the next year I am starting to study my carreer that is so important to be fluent with my english to work outside from my country English is one my favorite languages . ..... an travel to United States is one my dreams.
2015년 10월 8일 오전 3:16
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Hiiii :)

I am Peruvian. I want to speak English because I love to travel around the world, meeting new people who share the same interests, hobbies, etc. I don't work right now. I am only studying English to learn. Next year I will begin studying for my carreer. It's important that I be fluent in English so that I can work outside of my country

English is one my favorite languages. Traveling to the United States is one my dreams.


** Great job. I understood everything you were intending to communicate =)  

2015년 10월 9일
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Hiiii :)

I am peruvian , I want to speak english because I love to travel around the world and meet new people who share the same interests and hobbies , ..... . Now , I don't work yet , I am only studying english to learn . the next year I am starting to study for my career and that is why it is so important to be fluent with my english in order to work outside from my country
English is one of my favorite languages . ..... and travel to United States is one my dreams.

 

(Good luck with your goals!)

2015년 10월 9일

Hiiii :)

I am Peruvian. , I want to speak English because I love to travel around the world, and meet new people, share the same interests , and hobbies. , ..... . Now , I don't work yet. , I am only studying English to learn. the Next year, I am starting to study for my carreer career. that It is so important for me to be fluent with my in English to work outside from of my country.
English is one of my favorite languages. ..... an And traveling to the United States is one of my dreams.

2015년 10월 9일
we have the same dream haha, work harder so you can go there :D
2015년 10월 8일
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