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Marry me?
On the grass in a park, there were a little boy and a little girl playing together. They were next door neighbors.
Suddenly, the little boy stopped playing and asked: will you marry me when we are adult?
- No. She coldly replied.
- Why not? He retorted. ( 'To scream' is rather too loud for a reply, dont you think?)
-In my family, only members who are living together in a house are allowed to get married with one other. ( What is meaning of this ???? Must stay together in order to be ale to marry ? Pls rephrase this to make your meaning clear
For example: My dad married my mom; my grandfather married my grandmother; my uncle married my ant... That's all. Isnt what you are saying so obvious to all ? The last part is rather strange to me
P/s: Is there any wrong that should be corrected? Tks.
Marry me?
On the glass in a park, there were a little boy and a little girl playing together. They were next door neighbors.
Suddenly, the little boy stop playing and asked:
- Will you marry me when we are adult?
- No. She coldly replied.
- Why not? He screamed.
A relative of the girl, who was with them throughout their whole time in the park as a guardian ,overheard the boy and went to the girl rescue by saying,' In our family , anyone who wants to marry must live together with the other in the same house , just like your father and mother , your grandfather and grandmother, and your uncle and auntie . So, you two cannot marry because both of you stay in different houses'.
- In my family, only members who is living together in a house are allowed to get married with the other. For example: My dad married my mom; my grandfather married my grandmother; my uncle married my ant... That's all.
P/s: Is there any wrong that should be corrected? Tks.
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