Erivelton Camelo
My week My week was very busy. I worked a lot but I got it all. In Thursday at night my girlfriend and I went to Theatre. We watched a tribute to Beatles. It was very cool. But before to entry in the Theatre we drank a cold beer. It is very hot in Sao Paulo. NOw I hope very anxious to Saturday because i will go to in Ignite's concert. The show will be in Inferno Bar. My friends that I don't see a long time will be with me and this is will be very cool!
2015년 10월 9일 오후 6:10
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My week

My week was very busy. I worked a lot but I got all my work done.
On Thursday at night my girlfriend and I went to the theatre. We watched a tribute to Beatles. It was very cool. But before entering in the Theatre we drank a cold beer. It is very hot in Sao Paulo.
Now I hope very anxiously for Saturday because I will go to Ignite's concert. The show will be in the Inferno Bar.
My friends that I haven't seen in a long time will be with me and this is will be very cool!

 

<em>[Good work.]</em>

2015년 10월 9일
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