Helllo everyone

Hello everyone, My name is Edwin, I want to improve my English, i hope someone help me, please.
I studied English six years ago, after that i usually don't practice, but i am trying to find a way to improve or learn more in this webside. Thanks.

Helllo everyone

Hello everyone. My name is Edwin. I want to impove my English. I hope someone can help me. I studied English six years ago. After that, I hardly ever practiced, but I am trying to find a way to improve or learn more on this website. Thanks.

Note: It is strange to use please outside of a direct request. For instance, you could say "Can someone please help me?" or "Please help me." 

Hello everyone, My name is Edwin, I want to improve my English, i hope someone help me, please.
I studied English six years ago, after that i usually don't practice, but i am trying to fine a way to improve or learn more in this webside. Thanks.