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Nicolas
My day Today was an exhausting day. I woke up at 7 A.M and started the day with 3 hours of accounting. Then, I took a light sandwich as a meal, and, I got another 3 hours class about the economy. Once I've been done with these, I had to work on a team project related to logistic operations. It's not over yet! I went to the gym for 1:30 hours with a friend of mine. Now I need to relax, I've got my exams in 10 days, but after that, I'll have 1 week of vacations, so I guess it's worth it.
2015년 10월 14일 오전 3:30
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My Day

 

Today was an exhausting day. I woke up at 7 A.M and started the day with 3 hours of accounting. Then, I had ("Had" sounds more natural here unless you mean you took it out of a cooler at a deli, etc.) a light sandwich as a meal, and I had another 3 hour We actually use the singular here. class about the economy. You could also write "Then, I had a light sandwhich and a/another 3 hour class about the economy." or "Then, I had a light sandwhich followed by a/another 3 hour class about the economy.", both of which sound better. Once I was done with these, I had to work on a team project related to logistic operations.


It's not over yet! I also went to the gym for 1.5 (I think you mean 1 hour and 30 minutes, correct? We don't write "1:30 hours". We write it as "1.5 hours".)  hours with a friend of mine.


Now, I need to relax. I've got my exams in 10 days, but after that, I'll have a week off Or "a 1 week vacation", so I guess it's worth it.

 

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2015년 10월 15일

My day

Today was an exhausting day.
I woke up at 7 A.M and started the day with 3 hours of accounting. Then, I took a light sandwich as a meal and went for another 3 hours class about economics. Once I was done with these, I had to work on a team project related to logistic operations.
It's not over yet! I went to the gym for 1:30 hours with a friend of mine.
Now I need to relax, I've got my exams in 10 days, but after that, I'll have 1 week of vacations, so I guess it's worth it.

2015년 10월 14일
In 10 days, sorry
2015년 10월 14일
One question, "I've got my exams in 10 days", do you mean you will take exams in 10 days? Or you took the exam 10 days ago?
2015년 10월 14일
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