Hi there!
Hi everyone! This is my first note...I'll try not to search how to write this on Google, so I can really challege myself on writing using my own capacities.
challenge (missing an 'n')
Other words you can use instead of 'capacities': capabilities or abilities
I'm on this website to improve my english, I've always been fascinated by this language, plus, it's very important to know english today, so I want to learn it better than I can.
You can link these phrases together using connectives:
I'm on this website to improve my english BECAUSE I've always been fascinated by this language.
In addition, it's very important to know english today, so I want to learn it better than I can more than I know at the moment.
I would like also to learn other languages, like French, German and Spanish, but I'm attending at the University here, in Italy, so I have not that much time...
I'm attending University here in Italy, so I don't/do not have that much time.
Now, bye to all the readers, I hope I have not done a mess in this short note, please be kind to me :)
Made a mess! (Done a mess means something COMPLETELY different haha)
Only some slight errors. Other than that, it's a very well written piece!