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My family Hello I'm Mio. Today I will talk about my family. I live alone near my place of work for 3.5 years. My family live in the next prefecture. There are father, mother, sister and two younger brothers. Father, mother, and sister are working, two younger brothers are university students. Living alone is little lonely and tough. But I became able to cook, wash and keep clean my house. Now I'm grateful for my mother.
2015년 11월 6일 오후 2:41
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My family

Hello I'm Mio.
Today I will talk about my family.

I have lived alone near my place of work for 3.5 years.
My family live in the next prefecture. There are my father, mother, sister and two younger brothers.
My father, mother and sister are working and my two younger brothers are university students.

Living alone is a little lonely and tough. But I became able to cook, wash and keep clean my house.
Now I'm grateful for my mother.

 

Hello Mio,

 

Nice little text about your family, just a few small mistakes. When we are talking about something which started in the past and continues up to now we use the present perfect - have or has + past participle.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

2015년 11월 6일
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