Jaime Oliver
When I lived in America When we lived in America, we has a big home in medium of a wonderful park with green trees and brillants flowers. I remember when we were playing football with our children in that park. My parents strolled around the city and I has a stunning bath in the swimming pool of the town. My brother went to his work on bicycle on rush hour, but he knew shortcuts. On weekend I took city break with my friends, we always traveled in bus. The life in America was very stressful, but now our life in Europe is more quiet and easy. Here there aren't anxiety.
2015년 11월 24일 오후 10:01
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When I lived in America

When we lived in America, we had a big home in the middle of a wonderful park with green trees and brillant flowers. I remember when we were playing football with <em>our?</em> children in that park. My parents strolled around the city and I had a stunning bath in the swimming pool of the town. My brother went to his job by bicycle during rush hour, but he knew shortcuts. On the weekend I took <em>city break?</em> with my friends, we always traveled by bus.

Life in America was very stressful, but now our life in Europe is more quiet and easy. Here there isn't anxiety.

2015년 11월 24일
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