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Question Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS): 1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship .... 2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this university I ....
2015년 11월 25일 오전 1:37
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Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS):
1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship ....
2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this university I ....

 

1*) I have a strong motivation TO apply for this scholarship...

1**) I feel heavily inclined (I feel this is better than motivation in this context) to apply for this scholarship because...

 

2*) During my studies at university I learned...

 

I don't know if you still need help with this, but I just wanted to give you different ways to word things.

2015년 12월 6일

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Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS):
1) I have a great desire to apply strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship ....
2) During my studies STUDY/STUDUING in this university/at university x, I ....

2015년 11월 25일

Question

Please, help me to choose a correct way of expressing some things (CAPITAL LETTERS):
1) I have a strong motivation IN applying for this scholarship ....
2) During my STUDY/STUDUING in this university I ....

I have a strong motivation for applying for this job.

During my studies in this University I ....

2015년 11월 25일
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