Paulo Ribeiro
전문 강사
The Evil Scientist I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget… I kept behind the counter, trying to keep unseen from that point. At the same time I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man, in doctor’s clothing, was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was another man all in white clothes. I was appalled to see,the man was tied to the chair. Shocked, I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. Before I decided to do something to interfere it was late. The doctor had already pulling the syringe off. For an entire minute the man in chair stood motionless...
2015년 11월 25일 오전 1:43
교정 · 2

The Evil Scientist

I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget…
I kept behind the counter, trying to keep (or, remain) unseen from that point (or, position). At the same time, I couldn’t see the entire room. It wasn’t a big place. There were several book shelves around a sort of “medical recliner chair”. A man in doctor’s clothing was standing next to the chair holding a syringe. On the chair was (or, sat) another man dressed all (or, entirely) in white clothes. I was appalled to see that the man was tied to the chair. Shocked (or, In a state of shock), I froze. “What the hell is he doing?”, I asked myself. By the time I decided to do something to interfere, it was too late. The doctor had already pulled the syringe off. For an entire minute, the man in chair sat motionless...

 

**

Very creative and well written! 

2015년 11월 25일
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!