Misa
11/26/2015 It was a lovely morning. Minnie happily hopped onto the front passenger seat. Her grandpa turned his key to rev up the engine. The car coughed and then came to live; it gave soft purrs, starting to move forward. The car staggered out of the shrub and drove onto a quite road. It was moving so lazily and unhurriedly that overtaking it was like shooting fish in a barrel. Her Grandpa twisted the button, a cracking sound of old-time favorite song was buzzing from radio. They basked in the music in their slow-moving car. Suddenly, a car lurched from the side and nearly knocked on them. At eleventh hour, their car managed to swerve to the side and avoided the accident.
2015년 11월 26일 오후 2:00
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11/26/2015

It was a lovely morning. Minnie happily hopped into the front passenger seat. Her grandpa turned his key to rev up the engine. The car coughed and then came to life; it gave soft purrs, starting to move forward.

The car staggered out of the shrub and drove onto a quiet road. It was moving so lazily and unhurriedly that overtaking it was like shooting fish in a barrel.

When her Grandpa twisted the knob, a cracking sound of old-time favorite music was buzzing from the radio. They basked in the music in their slow-moving car.

Suddenly, a car lurched from the side and nearly hit them. At the eleventh hour, their car managed to swerve to the side and avoid the accident.

2015년 11월 26일
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