Daisy
my list of food I like eat breads and eggs in the morning. in the afternoon I usually have some meat fired or boil , vegetable , rice and soup. at last after work I have noodle for dinner
2015년 11월 27일 오후 2:39
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My list of food

I like to eat bread and eggs in the morning. In the afternoon I usually have some fried or boiled meat, vegetables, rice and soup. At last, after work I have noodles for dinner.

 

Hello Tit,

 

Just a few small mistakes this time, fried and boiled are adjectives (describing words) and they usually go in front of the noun (thing).

 

Keep writing :)

 

Bob

2015년 12월 1일

my list of food

I like to eat breads and eggs in the morning. In the afternoon I usually have some grilled or boiled meat, vegetables, rice and soup. At last after work I have noodles for dinner.

2015년 11월 27일
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