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HI English Hi my name is Hailey I'm learning English in Korea and i'm taking a class in an academy these days i think speaking English is not easy .It's also hard to think of anythinkg to talk about when i speak in here. That's because i hardly ever wirte English on the Internet. I don't know why writing English is this hard even if i learn English everyday ;( but i decided to upload on italki everyday for my English and oneday i'll be able to speak English fluently to connect with someone from other country! Nice to meet you:)00
2015년 11월 27일 오후 3:38
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Hi English

Hi! My name is Hailey.
I'm learning English in Korea and i'm taking a class in an academy. these days
I think speaking English is not easy. It's also hard to think of anythinkg to talk about when i speak in here. That's because i hardly ever wirte in English on the Internet. I don't know why writing English is this hard, even if i am learning English everyday ;( But i have decided to upload on italki everyday for my English, and oneday i'll be able to speak English fluently to and connect with someone from another country!
Nice to meet you:)00

 

This is fantastic! I corrected it very harshly as the were hardly any mistakes, I just changed it to sound mre natural. But it was still extremly good! Well done :)

2015년 11월 30일
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