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Drug abuse Drug abuse is a serious problem due to its bad effects on a person's money, health as well as his relationship. First of all, drugs like heroine, cocaine,...are addictive, after experiencing once or twice, you absolutely can become its victim. The only way to satisfy your drug addiction is taking it again, that means lots of money will be spent on that useless thing. Moreover those drugs are dangerous, using them is analogous with putting poison on your body, this toxic substances will damage your body systems silently. Besides, drug can make a person be abandoned by their family and friends because nobody wants to related to drug addicts. For these reasons, drug abuse, without a doubt, destroy our life fully.
2015년 11월 28일 오후 3:15
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Drug abuse

Drug abuse is a serious problem due to its bad effects on a person's money, health as well as his relationships. First of all, drugs like heroine, cocaine,...are addictive. After experiencing the effects once or twice, you absolutely can become its victim. The only way to satisfy your drug addiction is taking it again, which means lots of money will be spent on that useless thing. Moreover, those drugs are dangerous. Using them is analogous with putting poison on your body. These toxic substances will damage your bodily systems silently. Besides, drugs can make a person to be abandoned by their family and friends because nobody wants to related to drug addicts. For these reasons, drug abuse, without a doubt, destroy a person's life fully.

 

<em>[Good job.]</em>

2015년 11월 28일
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