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cope with stresses In recent years, we are faced with all kinds of stresses nowadays, which is becoming more and more serious. Not only students in school but also career in society have to face the problem. As we all know, it is important for everyone to maintain the peace of mind. We should take a series of effective measures to cope with situation. For one thing, don't make yourself work for a long time. You'd better have a rest after you have studied an hour or so. For another, take good care of your emotion. Don't the bad things suppress in the heart. Don't give yourself too much. Finally, do exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. Some of us get dipped in flat, some in stain, some in gloss. Personally, Ibelieve that inner peace by reading books. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us. Yesterday is a history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift, that is why it is called-present. Inner peace, everything runs smoothly in the course of my life.
2015년 11월 29일 오전 6:50
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In recent years, we are faced with all kinds of stresses nowadays*, which is becoming more and more serious. Not only students in school but also career workers in society have to face the problem. As we all know, it is important for everyone to maintain the peace of mind. 

We should take a series of effective measures to cope with this situation. For one thing, don't make yourself work for a long time. You'd better have a rest after you have studied an hour or so. For another, take good care of your emotion. Don't let the bad things suppress in the heart. Don't give yourself too much. Finally, do exercises every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight.
Some of us get dipped in flat, some in stain, some in gloss. [I like this sentence but I don't understand the meaning]]


Personally, I believe that inner peace can be found by reading books. Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us. Yesterday is a history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift, that is why it is called "present". Inner peace... everything runs smoothly in the course of my life.

 

* You already said "in recent years", so you don't need "nowaways". Pick only one

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