Lushan
I like to meet new friends I live in Beijing Today Beijing is in haze. i almost can't breath. that's all my wechat is gerry2866
2015년 12월 1일 오전 2:23
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I like to meet new friends / I like meeting new friends / I would like to meet new friends


I live in Beijing. 
Today, Beijing is in a haze. / Beijing is in a haze today.
I almost can't breath.

That's all. 
My wechat is gerry2866.

 

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Well done, Lushan! It was nearly perfect. After the slashes, I've written some alternatives. There was nothing wrong with what you wrote; I just wanted to emphasize that there is always more than one way to write or say something. Good luck!

 

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