I am gald to come here Hello everyone,I am Jie.Today is my first time to write short essay on italki,or a diary.I feel a little excited. Last night,I was staied in here until 03:00 ，in order to read

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I am gald to come here Hello everyone,I am Jie.Today is my first time to write short essay on italki,or a diary.I feel a little excited. Last night,I was staied in here until 03:00 ，in order to read some essay.I think I found an good place to learn from each other! Ha!My mother doesn‘t worry about my English no longer. My English is not good,I hope to be correctd! Thank you for take time to read my essay.

2015년 12월 1일 오전 11:14

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I'm so glad to be here!

Hello everyone, I'm Jie. This is the first time I've written anything on italki. I feel quite excited!
Last night, I stayed on here until 3:00 am in order to read some essays. I think we've found a good place to learn from one other! Ha! My mother isn‘t worried about my English any longer.

My English isn't very good, so I hope to be corrected! Thank you for taking the time to read my essay.

2015년 12월 1일

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