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Fabio
New gradued nurse Hi everyone, I'm Fabio, I'm 22 years old and I'm an italian boy. I live in Vercelli, a small town in the north of Italy, and the last 27/11/15 I became a clinical nurse enabled to profess the profession. I hope this text contains not so much errors. Thanks for the help you're going to give me. Have a good night-

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New gradued nurse

Hi everyone, I'm Fabio, I'm 22 years old and I'm an Italian guy.
I live in Vercelli, a small town in the north of Italy, and last November I became a clinical nurse ready to begin working in the profession.
I hope this text doesn't contain so many errors.
Thanks for the help!

Have a good night-

 

Hi Fabio! Congratulations on graduating!

"boy" means a young male... usually a child or a teenager. Male adults are men or guys.

"Thanks for the help you're going to give me" sounds weirdly presumptuous... it sounds better to just say "Thanks for the help."

 

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