My View on Opportunity （please help me ) Different people hold different view on opportunities. Some people think that there are few opportunities in life while others believe that opportunities are f

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My View on Opportunity （please help me ) Different people hold different view on opportunities. Some people think that there are few opportunities in life while others believe that opportunities are fair to everyone. As long as you strive for it, you always have a chance. As far as I am concerned, i'm in favor of the later one. In the first place, opportunities are given to those who are ready. Just as a porpular saying said that when happiness comes to the door, you are not at home. So we should prepare to welcome opportunities' coming all the time. In the second place, one should sweat for opportunities instead of just waiting. opportunities are given to those who are hardworking. if you see those successful men's biographies, you will find that most of them had lived a hard past, and the God did not ignore their efforts. To sum up, opportunities are fair to everyone dose not mean that every one can get opportunities. To some degree, it depends on good luck. To much more degree, it depends on your efforts.

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My View on Opportunity （please help me )

Different people hold different view on opportunities. Some people think that there are few opportunities in the life while others believe that opportunities are fair to everyone. As long as you strive for it, you always will (it's not wrong, but I think better adding "will") have a chance.

As far as I am concerned, i'm in favor of the later(last) one. In the first place (Firstly), opportunities are given to those who are ready. Just as a porpular (popular) saying said (says) that when happiness comes to the door, you are not at home. So we should prepare to welcome the opportunities(' <==erease this) coming all the time. In the second place (Secondly), (one ?) should sweat for opportunities instead of just waiting - We should do our best to get new opportunities instead of just waiting that something fall from sky(Face this like a suggestion). The opportunities are given to those who are hard-working. If you see those successful men's biographies, you will find that most of them had lived a hard past and the God did not ignore their efforts.

To sum up, the opportunities are fair to everyone it dose not (does not or doesn't) mean that every one can get opportunities. To some degree, it depends on good luck. To much more degree (To beyond this degree), it depends on your efforts.