Riva
My Personal Challenge My personal challenge in mastering the English language is to be able to write compositions that are free of grammar mistakes and awkward sentences. Why? Because people say that 'the English language opens many doors'. For me, its the door to future scholarships and free trips abroad. For my short term goals, I also find that writing is one of the skills that I need to improve. That is why I keep on practicing at italki. With the help (correction) of everyone here, I hope I can conquer this challenge...soon.
2016년 1월 9일 오후 2:35
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My Personal Challenge

My personal challenge in mastering the English language is to be able to write compositions that are free of grammar mistakes and awkward sentences. Why? Because people say that 'the English language opens many doors'. For me, it's the door to future scholarships and free trips abroad.

For my short term goals, I also find that writing is one of the skills that I need to improve. That is why I keep on practicing at on italki. With the help (correction) of everyone here, I hope I can conquer this challenge...soon.

 

Your writing is definitely very good!

2016년 1월 9일
Ow, thank you Joling..:)
2016년 1월 13일
I believe u can make it. Just stick to it. Best wishes to u.
2016년 1월 10일
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