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A coming-of-age celebration In Japan, today is Coming-of-Age Day. I'm 21years old, so I didn't take part in today's celemony. I feel that a year has passed by like a flash. I looked a lot of articles of my friend's coming-of-age celebration on Twitter, so that it brought back memories of my celemony.

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A coming-of-age celebration

In Japan, today is Coming-of-Age Day.
I'm 21years old, so I didn't take part in today's ceremony. I feel that a year has passed by like a flash. I looked at a lot of articles of my friend's coming-of-age celebration on Twitter, so that and it brought back memories of my ceremony.

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21 is too young to be looking back and wondering where the time went =p. I think it's cool that Japan has a coming of age celebration though.
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a little bit suggestion for your words~~
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I'm 21years old, so I didn't take part in today's celemony. I feel this year has passed by like a flash. I read a lot of articles of my friend's coming-of-age celebration on Twitter. So it brought up memories of my celemony

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