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make a story from the words that you want learn This story is about two brothers. They always headede somewhere because this was there job. I mean this was a part of there job. Now they were digging around an abandoned ghost house. Yes they were some kind of "ghost busters". This job had come up when they were at the roadhouse. Otherwise they would gone to Vegas to play poker but now they cruised to middle of the nowhere. This job probably would be the most boring thing that they have ever solved before so they were just bugging each other until they arrived to the old house. The precaution is the most important thing in this "professon" because you can be killed by any supernatural creature. They were supposed to be together all the time and watch each others back but now they were separated by a human voice. The oldest guy went to the backdoor, the youngest to the front door. The youngest intended to broke into the house but he changed his mind. He went back to his brother. They remained together. When they were inside the house they started to look around. They saw a creature that walked across to the hallway. They headed to there and they finally found it but something strange revealed ..... There odds fell off..

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make a story from the words that you want to learn

This story is about two brothers. They always headed somewhere because this was there job. I mean this was a part of their job. Now they were digging around an abandoned ghost house. Yes they were some kind of "ghost busters". This job had come up when they were at the roadhouse. Otherwise they would have gone to Vegas to play poker but now they were cruising in the amidst of nowhere.
This job probably was the most boring thing that they had ever solved before so they were just bugging each other until they arrived at the old house.
The precaution was the most important thing in this "profession" because you could be killed by any supernatural creature. They were supposed to be together all the time and watched each others back but now they were separated by a human voice. The elder guy went to the back door, the young one to the front door. The young one intended to broke into the house but he changed his mind. He went back to his brother. After that they entered together . When they were inside the house they started to look around. They saw a creature that walked across the hallway. They headed towards hallway and they finally found it but something strange revealed ..... There odds fell off..
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anybody who can correct my writing, please!!

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