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Nowadays, Human beings enjoy better comfortable conditions than 100 years ago. But, in my opinion, it is not widespread to everything, so I will give several examples to explain it.
First of all, I will start talking about health. Now we can be cured of almost any illness and have better treatments to improve live from disabled people thanks to science development.
On other hand, current entertainment has positive points of views but bad ones too. For example, we have videogames which gives an entertainment never seen before. However there are cases of unsociable people because of this.
Finally I would like to discuss about the population. Despite new technologies our generation enjoy worse weather conditions than one generation ago. Day after day we realise that global warming is a reality and this is because of an uncontrolled pollutant emissions due to car emissions, factory emissions, etc.
In conclusion, from my point of view I think we live in better conditions than 100 years ago but there are few topics that have even got worse.
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Help with this essay please. I can help you in Spanish
Nowadays, human beings enjoy better more comfortable conditions than they did 100 years ago. But, in my opinion, it is this does not widespread to include everything, so I will give several examples to explain it.First of all, I will start talking talk about health. Now we can be cured of almost any illness and have better treatments to improve the lives from of disabled people thanks to developments in science development.
On other hand, current modern entertainment has some positive points of views but bad ones too. For example, we have videogames which gives an provide entertainment never seen before. However, there are cases of people becoming unsociable people because of this.
Finally I would like to discuss about the population. Despite new technologies our generation enjoys worse weather conditions than one generation ago. Day after day we realize that global warming is a reality and this is because of an uncontrolled pollutant emissions pollution due to car emissions, factory emissions, etc.
In conclusion, from my point of view I think we live in better conditions today than 100 years ago, but there are a few topics that things have even gotten worse.
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