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First notebook entry: Introducing myself As we all know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. It’s important for us to study English well. Especially Scientific English. It can really broaden my mind and enrich my knowledge. From the lessons, I learn a lot, not only the English, but also the scientific knowledge. Every Friday afternoon, I should get here and learn English. I hope I can go home when the school is over as well. I know, however, no sweet without sweat. Second, I learn Scientific English, because as a student, I think study is our duty, I don’t want to waste any chance of study, so I come here.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

As we all know, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. It’s important for us to study English well. Especially Scientific English. It can really broaden my mind and enrich my knowledge. From the lessons, I learn a lot, not only the English, but also the scientific knowledge. Every Friday afternoon, I should get here and learn English. I hope I can go home when the school is over as well. I know, however, no sweet without sweat.

Second, I learn Scientific English, because as a student, I think study is our duty, I don’t want to waste any chance of study, so I come here.

(Aside from that one word I crossed out, I didn't see any errors. Great job!)

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