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My british professor This week a british couple came to my institute. They are Nathan and Siobhan from Bournemouth in the south of England. It's a city with many institutes that learn English to foreigners from all over the world. They say it's a wonderfull place with a long coast, about 10km where you can fell a fresh breeze, and there are many piers on there. They are ver friendly and politely. The man is in charge of our class. The first class was about his introduction, he asked us some vocabulary. It was interesting because we learn about his culture. The second one was about how be politely. It was an amazing class and very funny. He is an excellent actor, every single situation was actuated by him and he demanded fast answers and we were very nervous. But we could say good answers. Can someone correct my text? Thnx

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My british professor

This week a british couple came to my institute. They are Nathan and Siobhan from Bournemouth in the south of England. It's a city with many institutes that learn teach English to foreigners from all over the world. They say it's a wonderfull place with a long coast, about 10km where you can fell feel a fresh breeze, and there are many piers on there.
They are very friendly and politely. The man is in charge of our class.
The first class was about his an introduction, he asked us some vocabulary. It was interesting because we learned about his culture.
The second one was about how be politely. It was an amazing class and very funny. He is an excellent actor, every single situation was actuated acted out by him and he demanded fast answers and we were very nervous. But we could say good answers.

Can someone correct my text? Thnx
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My British professor

This week, there was a British couple coming to my institute. They were Nathan and Siobhan from Bournemouth in the south of England. It's a city with many institutes that teaches English to foreigners from all over the world. They said it's a wonderfull place with a long coast ( about 10km ) where you could feel fresh breeze, and there were many piers on there, too.

( "Breeze" is an uncountable noun so you should not use " a" infront of them)
They were very friendly and polite. The man was in charge of our class.
The first class was about his introduction. He asked us some vocabulary. It was interesting because we learnt about the culture of his country.
The second one was about how to be polite. It was an amazing and very funny class. He was an excellent actor, every single situation was actuated by him. He demanded fast answers and we were very nervous. Unfortunately, we could have good ones.

REMEMBER Nachito: 

1. Politely is an adverb, not an Adjective. So you can't say: They are politely!

It's better to say: They're polite. Got it?

2. This story happened so we must change the tense into " Past tense". 

Thanks for sharing your story! Practise writing more to make your English better ^^

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Ah, one more thing. Your sentences are always long and complicated with a lot of Subjects and Verbs. So why don't you separate them into shorter ones? ^^

 

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My british professor

This week a british couple came to my institute. They are Nathan and Siobhan from Bournemouth in the south of England. It's a city with many institutes that learn teach English to foreigners from all over the world. They say it's a wonderfull wonderful place with a long coast, about 10km where you can fell feel a fresh breeze, and there are many piers on there.
They are very friendly and politely. The man is in charge of our class.
The first class was about his introduction., he He asked us some vocabulary. It was interesting because we learned about his culture.
The second one was about how to be politely. It was an amazing class and very funny. He is an excellent actor., Eevery single situation was actuated performed by him and he demanded fast answers and we were very nervous. But we could say give good answers.

Can someone correct my text? Thnx

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