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ショーのテレビ番組
私は、だいぶキャットフィッシュを見たよ。キャットフィッシュで人々が一人を見つける話しをしたいです。彼らは、電話、とフェイスブックを持っています、だから携帯番号は、インチキかもしれません。時々かわいく感じます。私は、ショーを好きでした。面白いというより?、興味深い?です。私は、(それらの)人々が幸せでいてほしいですね!
日本語で書いているのはすこしだけです、私は、たくさんの語句(による助け)を仰がないといけない。頑張ります。
Hello! Firstly I didn't know what カトフィッシュ is and couldn't catch the meaning of this essay so well. But after searching on the net, I got to know about it and was just easy to correct :)
After hearing its short commentary for about 10 minutes by the Japanese personality living in US, I was interested in its story. And felt that the director is very nice person. I want to see the movie when having time. Thank you for writing about this topic!
(Please let me know if there is anything wrong in my English. Thank you.)
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