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Today
Today is wednesday,It is very pleasently and windly.The most important is not rained today.but I am not very happy in today,beacuse I was busy, I had all the time in the school and learned english and others.I feel a little tried.
In the evening ,I had a rest recently,My friend and I went to climea and watched a movie which made by American,It is about friendship betwend four girls.I love it!
Today is Wednesday, it is very pleasant, but windy. Most importantly, it hasn't rained today. However, I am not very happy because I have been busy. I spent all day at school and learned Englislh and other subjects. I feel very tired.
This evening, I had a rest. Then my friend and I went to the cinema to watch an American movie. It was about the friendship between four girls. I loved it!
Today
Today it is Wednesday and very pleasant and windy. The most important thing is that it has not rained today but I am not very happy about today because I was busy. I spent all the time in the school and learned English and other things. I feel a little tried.In the evening, I had a rest recently. My friend and I went to the Crimea and watched a movie which made by Americans. It is about the friendship between four girls. I loved it!
Very well written.
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