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LA SEXTA TV OVERVIEW La Sexta was founded in 2006, it is the sixth nationwide broadcast private channel in Spain ranking the third private channel most seen in our country. The programming of la sexta is mainly generalist with an emphasis on humour and entertainment. The channel also frecuently programmes American sports as well as worldwide successful series, most of them foreign productions. In the late years the channel is being acknowledged by its news and debate programmes based on investigative journalism which alignment is left-wing. BRAND La Sexta addresses to an adult public that look for risky formats as well as alternative contents, albeit not forgetting to target more young spectators. Programmes such as "El Objetivo", "El Intermedio", "Al Rojo Vivo", "Más Vale Tarde", "El Club de la Comedia" o "Salvados" have been singled out for promoting a calm intelligent dialogue with its public. Coinciding with the tenth anniversary of the channel last month, not only did La Sexta launch a restyling of its brand identity but it also presented its new web. The new image maintains the colour and the hexagonal form of the number 6 adding urban essential characteristics according with the channel’s evolution. The slab serif typography in the new logo represents a more journalistic approach, a strength that the new programmes, in fact, show off. OWNERSHIP Atresmedia the biggest media group in Spain known for having conservative-wing channels, acquired La Sexta in 2011. Paradoxically, this group reinforced the identity of the channel understanding that numerous minorities are an economically interesting target to create contents for. This way, businesses strategies overcome ideological tendencies in a way that isn’t very common at least, here in Spain.
2016년 5월 15일 오후 1:38
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LA SEXTA TV

OVERVIEW
La Sexta was founded in 2006, it is the sixth nationwide nationally broadcast private channel in Spain ranking as the third private channel most seen watched (<em>or</em> viewed) in our country. The programming of La Sexta is mainly generalist with an emphasis on humour and entertainment. The channel also frequently programmes American sports as well as worldwide globally successful series, most of them foreign productions. In the late recent years (<em>or</em> in the last few years) the channel is being has been acknowledged by for its news and debate programmes based on investigative journalism which whose alignment is left-wing (<em>or</em> which align to the left-wing).

BRAND
La Sexta addresses to targets an adult public that looks for risky formats as well as alternative contents, albeit not forgetting to target (<em>or</em> to accommodate, <em>to avoid repeating my earlier suggestion of</em> target) more young* spectators (<em>better:</em> viewers). Programmes such as "El Objetivo", "El Intermedio", "Al Rojo Vivo", "Más Vale Tarde", "El Club de la Comedia" o "Salvados" have been singled out for promoting a calm intelligent dialogue with its public.

Coinciding with the tenth anniversary of the channel last month, not only did La Sexta launch a restyling of its brand identity but it also presented (<em>or</em> unveiled <em>or</em> launched) its new website. The new image maintains the colour and the hexagonal form of the number 6 adding urban essential urban characteristics according aligning with (<em>or</em> reflecting) the channel’s evolution. The slab serif typography in the new logo represents a more journalistic approach, a strength that the new programmes, in fact, show off.

OWNERSHIP
Atresmedia, the biggest media group in Spain known for having conservative-wing channels, acquired La Sexta in 2011. Paradoxically, this group reinforced the identity of the channel understanding that numerous minorities are an economically interesting target to create contents for. This way, businesses strategies overcome ideological tendencies in a way that isn’t very common, at least, here in Spain.

 

Very well written Rosana. You made very few errors, most of my comments were subtle grammar points to sound more natural. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.


"the sixth nationwide nationally broadcast private channel" - Using the adverb "nationally" sounds better here, as you're using it before the verb. "Nationwide" sounds fine if it's used after the verb, e.g. "the sixth private channel to broadcast nationwide"


"as well as worldwide globally successful series" - Same as above. Better to use an adverb before "successful", although it's OK to use "worldwide" after it, e.g. "as well as series that have been successful worldwide".


* "More young viewers" means a greater number of young viewers. In the context of your paragraph, I suspect you mean "younger viewers".


Content / Contents - When referring to the general output of a television channel or a website, "content" is used (without an "s"). "Contents" (with a "s") is used to refer to the individual sections of a book or newspaper.

2016년 5월 15일
1

LA SEXTA TV

OVERVIEW
La Sexta was founded in 2006; it is the sixth nationwide broadcast private channel in Spain, ranking as the third private channel most seen (better: viewed) (private channel) in our country. The programming of La Sexta is mainly generalist with an emphasis on humour and entertainment. The channel also frecuently programmes American sports as well as worldwide globally successful series, most of them foreign productions. In the late recent years the channel is being has been acknowledged by for its news and debate programmes based on investigative journalism whose alignment is left-wing.

BRAND
La Sexta addresses to an adult public that looking for risky formats as well as alternative contents, albeit not forgetting to target more younger spectators viewers. Programmes such as "El Objetivo", "El Intermedio", "Al Rojo Vivo", "Más Vale Tarde", "El Club de la Comedia" o and "Salvados" have been singled out for promoting a calm, intelligent dialogue with its the (or: their) public.

Coinciding with the tenth anniversary of the channel last month, not only did La Sexta launch a restyling of its brand identity but it also presented (better: unveiled) its new website. The new image maintains the colour and the hexagonal form of the number 6 adding urban(??) essential characteristics according with (better: reflecting) the channel’s evolution. The slab serif typography in the new logo represents a more journalistic approach, a strength that the new programmes, in fact, show off.

OWNERSHIP
Atresmedia, the biggest media group in Spain and which is known for having conservative-wing channels, acquired La Sexta in 2011. Paradoxically, this group reinforced the identity of the channel understanding that numerous minorities are an economically interesting target audience to create contents for. In this way, their businesses strategy overcomes ideological tendencies in a way that isn’t very common at least, here in Spain.

 

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a TV programme (UK) / program (US) => noun

a computer program (UK and US) => noun

to program [for TV or computers] (UK and US) => verb

2016년 5월 15일
I'm having it on September. It will be challenging because the classes end this month. I would prefer do it in june but, it is not possible in my school.
2016년 5월 16일
How did you do on your C1 exam?
2016년 5월 15일
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