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Can some one help me to correct this, Thanks :)

I want to talk about videogames

The videogames are being improved since his creation

Videogames have been improved since their creation

Nowadays the videogames are in the 8th generation of his history.

Nowadays videogames are in the 8th generation of their history

The first generation of videogames came with the Magnavox Odyssey in 1972

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This first console only had 28 games and they were a very simple games like ping pong and they don’t had sound and we weren’t able to our progress in the game.

This first console only had 28 games and they were very simple games like ping pong and they didn't have sound and we weren't able to progress in the game

Progress is a verb here, so you must say "to progress", not "to our progress". You can say "to our progress" if you mean to use "progress" like a noun, example: "This is detrimental to our progress".

With the current videogames like the Ps4 Xbox one or Nintendo Wii U we can play a lot of games and they´re have a lot of data inside of the games and a lot of features like a resolution in 4K and a great history even better of many movies.

With the current videogame consoles like the Ps4, xbox one or nintendo Wii U, we can play a lot of games, and they have a lot of data inside of the games, and a lot of features like a resolution in 4k and a great history even better than many movies.

The Ps4, Xbox one and Wii U are videogame "consoles". A Console is what you play videogames with.

Remember, "They're" is a contraction of "They" and "Are", example: "They are -> They're". In english, we don't say "They are have", and so "They're have" is also incorrect. Instead, we say "They have".

"Better" is a "Comparison" word, where you compare something with something else. When comparing things, we say "Than", not "of". Examples:

"Better than"

"Worse than"

Video games are in their 8^th generation and have come a long way since they were created. The first generation of video games started in 1972 with the Magnavox Odyssey.This first video game console had 28 games which were very simple like ping pong, had no sound, and did not allow us to our progress in the game.

With current video games available on consoles like the PS4, Xbox One, or Nintendo Wii U we can play a lot of games. These games hold a lot of data, have a lot of features like 4k resolution, and contain a great history better than most movies. In the future the 9th generation of games will allow us to use VR (Virtual Reality) technology to experience being part of the game.