A succesfull day!
Hi everybody!
I want to comment that i had a good performance at university, yesterday :) . With only a couple of hours for my presentation, inspiration came to me and i decided to do a research about the relationship between the reduction of gender gap and the economic growth. These kind of topics have always interested to me, mainly because machism continues being present in my country.
Kisses for all of you, and i'd be really greatfull if you could tell me my mistakes.
Lucía!
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A successful day!
Hi everybody!I want to announce that I had a good performance at my university yesterday. With only a couple of hours until my presentation, an inspiration came to me and I decided to do research about the relationship between the reduction of gender gap and economic growth. These kinds of topics have always interested me, mainly because machismo continues being present in my country.
Kisses for all of you, and I'd be really grateful if you could tell me my mistakes.
Good job! Congratulations on your presentation! As to the English, just some minor spelling mistakes and a word or two needed the plural form. "I" as in "I had...," is always capitalized. Your sentence construction is easy to read and "flows" naturally, both of which are a sign of a good writer. I hope this helps you. J.
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Dear Mohamed,
When i talk about gender gap i mean to the different situations in which women are in desventage of men. For instance, the salary that a woman receives is less than the salary received by a man in my country, even if both of them had the same qualifications.
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reduction of gender gap and the economic growth
what do you mean can you be more explicit
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