I,m not hero(please help me to correct this essay)
I have been slept by one of my comfortableregion of my brain for ages.I have realised that I missed many things when I woke up.And I for one don,t want to see any my brothers and sisters lose their precious things any more.How could I live without any anxiety when my family need me to help them out?Maybe I,m not the one who was expected to be a hero for my family ,but I can,t just leave them alone .If I can do like that ,there must be no regrets for being a hero.
For myself:
sincerely :AKBAR
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I am not a hero(please help me to correct this essay)
I have been slept by one of my comfortableregion of my brain for ages .IFor myself:
sincerely :AKBAR
These two sentences do not make sense, maybe you could try to rephrase them.
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