The only one cake left
The train stopped at a small station. A man looked out of the window saw a woman sells cakes. He want to buy but the rain was heavily and far from his seat.
He saw a boy not far from his, " come on, boy. " He said, " Do you konw how much those cakes? " boy said, " It's five cents for each. " He given the boy ten cents said, " l give you ten cents to buy one for me, one for you. " waited for minutes the boy came back given the man five cents and said," The woman just have only one cake, l brought that for myshelf, so give you five cents. "
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The only one cake left
The train stopped at a small station. A man looked out of the window and saw a woman selling cakes. He wanted to buy one, but the rain was heavy and she was far from his seat.He saw a boy not far away from him. "come on, boy." He said, "Do you know how much those cakes cost?". The boy said, "It's five cents for each." He gave the boy ten cents and said, "l give you ten cents to buy one for me, and one for you." He waited for a few minutes, and the boy came back. He gave the man five cents and said," The woman only had one cake. I bought it for myself, so I give you five cents back."
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The oOnly one cCake lLeft
The train stopped at a small station. A man looked out of the window and saw a woman sellsselling cakes. He wanted to buy one, but the rain it was raining heavily, and the woman was far from his seat.He saw a boy not far from hishim., " come onCome here, boy.," Hhe said., " Do you konwknow how much those cakes cost? " The boy said, " It's five cents forThey're five cents each. " HeThe man givengave the boy ten cents and said, " l give youHere is ten cents to buy one for me, and one for you. " The man waited for a few minutes theuntil the boy came back. The boy givengave the manhim five cents and said," The woman just have only had one cake., l broughtbought that for myshelfmyself, so givehere is your five cents back. "
1、除了介词跟冠词之外，主题里面的单词第一个字母是要大写的。
2、引号里面的句子前后不要写空格，比如："Do you know how much those cakes cost?"
3、given是give的过去完成时太，而不是你想使用的简单过去时态。因此，given只能跟had一起用的 (比如：The man had given the boy ten cents to buy two cakes, but the woman only had one left.)。gave才是give的简单过去时态。
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The only one cake left.
Then he saw a boy not far from him.
"Come here, boy," he called out to him, " Do you know how much those cakes cost ? "
The boy said, " It's five cents each. "
He then gave the boy ten cents and told him, " l will give you ten cents to buy one for me and one for you. "
He waited for a few minutes before the boy came back .He returned five cents to him and said," The woman has only one cake left ; l brought that for myself, so here's your five cents. "
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