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SpiritDemon
About my University
4 years ago,i was getted to my university.It's in Henan province, and it is located in the Yellow river.I think my school is very well,i love it very much.
In the past 4 years,i grew up a lot.I learned many knowledge,such as psychology,education,and preschool education .Some courses very interesting and some courses very boring.My major subjects is preschool education. some people think the girl should lerned this subject,the boy shouled lerned other subjects,likes Computer Scinence or economics.When my dad konws i will learn preschool education,he laughed me 3 days.^-^ However he still encourage me learn this subject.
This year i was finished my education.And i have a job,i feel very well.
Uh,thank you for readding my article,can you help me to revise it? And i want to make a foreign friend,can you help me?
(the picture is my school^-^ very beautiful)
2016년 8월 4일 오전 3:31
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About my University
4 years ago, I began studying at my university i was getted to my university. It's in Henan province, and it is located in the Yellow river It's located along the Yellow River in Henan Province. I think my school is very well great, i I love it very much.In the past 4 years, i grew up I have grown up a lot. I have learned many new subjects many knowledge, such as psychology, education, and preschool education. Some courses were very interesting and some courses were very boring. My major subjects is I majored in preschool education (note: In the US it is common to say "early childhood education"). Some people think that the girl should lerned women should study this subject ,the while boy men shouled lerned should study other subjects, likes computer Scinence science or economics. When my dad konws i will learn found out I was studying preschool education, he laughed at me for 3 days.^-^ However he still encourages me to learn this subject.
This year I was finished my education I graduated from university this year.And I have a job, and I feel very well great.
Uh,thank you for readding reading my article, can you help me to revise it? And I also want to make a foreign friend, can you help me?
(the picture is my school^-^ very beautiful)
Great writing! I'm happy to hear that you decided to study preschool education/early childhood education even though it's not common for men to do so in your country (a similar stereotype exists in the US, too). I hope you found my corrections helpful and please let me know if you have any questions.
Good luck with your future career & English studies!
2016년 8월 4일
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