Is technology a real life improvement? (fce essay) Nowadays, technology is everywhere. Has technology made people’s lives better or worse? Notes Write about: medical science the internet your own id

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Is technology a real life improvement? (fce essay) Nowadays, technology is everywhere. Has technology made people’s lives better or worse? Notes Write about: medical science the internet your own idea Technology has became an important part of our life and we learnt to use it almost every day. It surely brought many benefits but there could be some negative effects. Internet is a perfect example. It has been creating new ways of communicating, sharing and purchasing, making them much easier. Social network and e-commerce are just two of the thousands services that the web offers. However, people are used to being connected to such an extent that they risk to become addicted to Internet, giving more importance to the online world rather that the real one. Another great improvement brought by technology is about medical research. Indeed, many medical discoveries would not have been possible without investing on it, thank to which people's life has become longer and we succeeded in solving many problems to people affected by difficult diseases. I think that we have to keep supporting technologic research because each next discoverie will have to pass through it. Technology is probably the most important resource we have. We just have to learn how to use it at the best!

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Is technology a real life improvement? (fce essay)

(Or: Does Technology Really Improve Life?)

Nowadays, technology is everywhere. Has technology made people’s lives better or worse?

Notes
Write about:

medical science
the internet
your own idea

Technology has become an important part of our life and we learn to use it almost every day. It surely has brought many benefits but there could be some negative effects.

The Internet is a perfect example. It has been creating new ways of communicating, sharing and purchasing, making them much easier. Social networking and e-commerce are just two of the thousands services that the web offers.

OK: However, people are used to being connected to such an extent that they risk

Or: However, people are so used to being connected to such an extent that they risk

to becoming addicted to the Internet, giving more importance to the online world rather than that the real one.

Another great improvement brought by technology is about in medical research. (This sentence should be divided into 2 sentences:) Indeed, many medical discoveries would not have been possible without investing on it in technology, thanks to which people's lives have become longer and we have succeeded in solving many problems to for people affected by difficult diseases.

I think that we have to keep supporting technological research because each next (either: each new, or: the next) discovery will have to pass through come from it. Technology is probably the most important resource we have. We just have to learn how to use it at the best wisely!