a bit of my life
my family is well big , have ten brothers ,five sister and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom is deceased have four years , i am a student fifteen ,and think that i am happy
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A bit of about my life
my family is, well, big. I have ten brothers, five sisters and five brothers-in-law .My dad is retired, my mom is deceased, have four years ago died four years ago , and I am a fifteen year old student fifteen ,and I think that I am happy.0
a bit of my life
My family is well big; I have ten brothers ,five sisters and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom passed away four years ago. I am a student, fifteen ,and think that I am happy.Hello Paloma, I added some corrections in yellow.
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a bit of my life
my family is well big , have ten brothers ,five sister and five brothers ,my dad is retired my mom is deceased have four years , i am a student fifteen ,and think that i am happyA bit about my family
My family is big, I have fifteen brothers and five sisters. My dad is retired, my mom passed away four years ago. I am a fifteen years old student and I think that I am happy.
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